No TJ is not serious until she uses multiply pokey sticks and maybe a whip or two.

One pokey stick is just a warning, especially on new members.

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Whoo hoo! UW is responding to the pokey stick!

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Originally posted by Transmute Jun Whoo hoo! UW is responding to the pokey stick!

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posting a story

Okay wild thought
wrote a fragmented story years and years ago,( it's not that long), that I may be able to change to add Joe to.
actualy it's a debate if it is Joe or ken, how do I go about doing this?
As it is my first , would it be best if I posted it for feedback and help?
so I can tweek it before doing a final draft for someone to proof read
love to hear feedback from those who have read and posted stories on line
feeling nervouse/nausious

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Big Thanks

okay just gotta remember were the story is
hopefully will have a draft posted in next few days.
I'm a happy little banana bender

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May the bad things get lost on the way to you door!

Looking forward to seeing your story, Littlewolf!

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Don't sweat the petty things and don't pet the sweaty things.

Stories oozing at inapproapriate times is something tht most of us here know about.

I actually had one of my favorite written pieces (and I think one of my best- "Phoenix") as I walked the 600m from where I parked my car to my workplace!

Then I did a mad scribble as the computer turned on and I logged in and a very naughty couple of hours getting it down so tht I wouldn't forget!

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"When I'm old, I don't want them to say of me, "She's so charming." I want them to say, "Be careful, I think she's armed." -G. Stoddart

Most of the board members are at work (US and UK) so it's only the four or so Aussies who are around at the moment.

We all take fic seriously here - so prefer to give constructive criticism rather than what first comes to mind.

Don't worry - people will comment and their comments will be better for taking the time to go through it a few times.

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"When I'm old, I don't want them to say of me, "She's so charming." I want them to say, "Be careful, I think she's armed." -G. Stoddart

big thanks

okay I'm going to log of and turn of the computer
maybe work on a few other stories
actually can I use you as a sounding board?
(not waiting for a reply)
Thinking about a story from little wolf alter ego Danger Mouse (DM) case notes on fellow earth defenders Gforce/Gatchaman - from point
basically other superheros / spies / agencies have some serious concerns about the mental heath of above mentioned, eg PTSD, co-dependancy, substance abuse, tendancy to excessive violence, absent father figures , no female involvement in upbringing, a man, often absent, who adopted 5 young children Questionable in itself (sexual overtones), avoid specific answers to children support agencys, has high if not destructive expectaions on children, who are subjectid to excessive physical and mental training, often left to own divises, untested scientific experiemntation, delibrate isolation and openly encorages them to lead a double life, frequently expose to masacistic, narcasistic persons, frequest and exeplained injures, frequest truancy from school etc
need to find councelling, pyc and social profilling books and notes as well as cross refereance between medical dictionary and disease profiling and anatamy and pysiology text bookd (always knew these courses would come in handy, plus need to find my triage notes and rescue notes)
Has something like this been writen about before?
will I upset other fans by writtin something like this?
how deep can I go??
we have 5 children who are trained to defend at extream measures, can they honestly intgrate them self into normal mainstream or must they be isolated after the war is over?
what if they kill once in civilian mode who is resonsible for that, can they actually be charge and go to prison?
OOZZING my brain is bring up what if all over the place
okay need to log off now - got to go and write , all else fails it will get filed with my other stories and I Can amend the characters to fit non Gatch/ Botp stories
excuse spelling in the sceme of things the stories is more important than first presenation
and spelling was never my strong point, does this site have a spell check, oh well cut and paste it is

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