Transmute Jun
Queen of the Bird Missiles
I am a Swan.
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Registration Date: 04-04-2007
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Yes, we saw the movie yesterday! As usual, it was excellent, but they left out a bunch of subplot stuff, because of the length. I am miffed that they didn't do more of the Fred and George joke prototypes and War against Umbridge plot. They also completely cut out the part about Ron and Hermione being prefects, and Grawp became utterly loveable instead of menacing. Kreacher's part was almost entirely cut out, and they didn't go into his character at all. They were also kind of vague on a bunch of stuff, including the Ministry's prejudice against non-human magical creatures.
Honestly, I'm so glad I know the book well, or I would have felt like I was missing out on a lot!
BACK ON TOPIC.....
I'm glad you're looking forward to the fic. AND (to really get it back on topic) it's an Eagle/Swan one!!!!!  
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16-07-2007 20:26
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Ebonyswanne
Gatchamaniac
I am a Swan.
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Registration Date: 25-04-2007
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The Swan pole dancing....
Now I have her outfit to describe in the re -write of the story... Springie when I post it eventually in archive can I use the pic???I love the look on his face, it's how I have it in the fic!
I went over the plot and it was lame for me to not have real twists and what I am doing with it is much better.
I have run it by TJ and she likes it, so you have Ken finding about her pole dancing by him seeing a poster of her first but thinking it is not Jun but someone who looks like her..
I have the whole time warp thing worked out, so there is lots of tension between Ken and Joe about how Joe has managed the team, and the angsty Eagle that the swan is now with Joe...and getting married...enough of the story here, back to putting pen to paper!
P.S here is a spiel for you* Springie* to go with the piccie of Junie the pole dancer...
.....The next act came on and the dancer could not be mistaken as anyone else.The music started as she flicked back her long ebony hair.
Wheres all mah soul sistas,Lemme hear yall flow sistas
JUN! His jaw dropped as she went into her routine.
He met Marmalade down IN old Moulin Rouge,She said, "Hello, hey Jo, you wanna give it a go?" Oh! uh huh
She was wearing a white leather Jacket with very long white boots, his hair was down around her shoulders and she looked older. More like twenty, he wondered what happened to the sweet innocent girl he once knew.
He come through with the money and the garter belts,I let him know we bout that cake straight up the gate uh,We independent women, some mistake us for whores,I'm sayin, why spend mine when I can spend yours !
He could only watch as she wrapped herself around the pole and made some very seductive moves that made his insides go to jelly.
Wear high heel shoes get love from the dudes,4 bad ass chicks from the Moulin Rouge
Then she undid the 3/4 lenght white Jacket and teased the men in the front row as she slowly undid the zipper to reveal a sexy red satin bra.
Ken knew she had a great body, but this was a woman he didntwant other men looking at.
She did a move around the pole that enabled her to take off the Jacket as she swirled around leaving on only the G-String and the red bra and long white boots.
She slid down the pole and winked into the audience. That wink always sent wonderful shivers down his spine, but she was sharing it with a room full of men who were shouting leering comments at her and full of Testosterone!
Touch of her skin feeling silky smooth,Color of cafe au lait alright,Made the savage beast inside roar until he cried,more-more-more
He was scandalized in a way he never thought he could be, what happened to her to make her resort to this? He wondered, and were was the rest of the team, and he began to make his way to the front of the stage....
Giuchie, Giuchie, ya ya dada (da daeaea yea),Giuchie, Giuchie, ya ya dada (da daeaea yea),Creole lady Marmalade
just a bit of raw material but in the name of fun and swooney Eagle/Swan moments. 
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This post has been edited 5 time(s), it was last edited by Ebonyswanne on 17-07-2007 at 10:55.
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17-07-2007 05:51
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I'm so glad you guys like it! I was happy with the way Ken's face turned out...it's hard to get the expression to look the way it is in my mind sometimes...
*giggles*
