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Ok everybody. Chapter 2 is up. This is the one I'm most nervous about.

Read and comment.

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Chapter 3 is done. I've tried to give Jun her dignity back. I'm to the point in the episode where the WTF factor goes off the charts. I hope you are all enjoying this. Please read and comment.

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It makes me very happy to see Joe getting far better emergency medical care from his teammates than he did in the episode itself!

Thank you for that.

Sounds like you, unfortunately, have some personal experience to draw on for this Huggles

-and that you are a big Rush fan!

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Thanks Iborgia88.

Chapters 4 and 5 is more of the medical stuff. I really thought they fell short in the episode on Joe's treatment. Also the fact that it takes a lot of people to keep the team going.

Also I hated the way Jun was written in that scene. Nambu also gets shortchanged. He is a extremely smart guy. A centerfuge? Really. He can get, just about, get anyone on Earth to help him.

I've been a Rush fan since 1978. That is the year I bought my first Rush album, Fly by Night, with my allowance.

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You're right, Dragonsbain! This episode lacked explanations at some points, and even proper attribution of certain characters' dignity! It's so good having you rewriting it whilst giving it its deserved standard, and it really shows that you're writing out of experience and from the heart! Looking forward to read more of this fic ... plus many other fics which I'm longing to find the time to read out of a huge, pending pile!

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Thanks Gatchamarie. Animeluv

I have already submitted the next chapter. Two days ago. I guess everyone got bit by the writing bug.

I'm glad you are enjoying it.

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Chapter 4 and 5 are up for your reading enjoyment.
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Hey everyone.

The rewrite seems to be going to a weird place. I need someone that I can bounce a radical idea off of. I guess that would be a beta writer. Sorry. I've never used one before.

So if someone is up for being my sounding board just answer this post.

Thanks much Daisy2

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I'll do it for you. Just send it over. I am loving your version of this episode.

The idea of keeping Joe talking by having him sing is ingenious.

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Thanks Becky.

I am flattered and humbled.

I'm on a long security shift today through tomorrow. So by Sunday night you shall receive the text.

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Hello all,
Sorry for the long wait. Chapter 6 is up. It took me so long to figure out exactly where to stick that missile fragment. I put it where all the changes will be emotional, not physical.

I almost submitted the chapter five times. This one I finally let go. I also gave Joe a few more injuries. This way he won't be trying to get out of bed.

Also big thanks to Becky who got me over a big hurdle.

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Thanks for the information, Dragonsbain! I'll definitely add your Chapter with my reading priorities as soon as these couple of days pass by!

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Hello all,
Hopefully, I will finish the battle scene this weekend. I want to thank everyone for the continuted support and feedback for this story. Especially since I've gone so far off canon as far as Nambu is concerned.

Be well all.

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