Ebonyswanne
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07-10-2008 08:32
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Ebonyswanne
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I am a Swan.
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quote: | Originally posted by Transmute Jun
The producers, or Nambu? I think it's fairly clear (at least in the early eps) that Joe isn't really a good overall leader. he doesn't have a lot of patience for people who can't keep up, and he's a little too trigger happy on the bird missiles. In episode 5 they ran out of BMs because of this, and I can see that happening every episode if Joe were in charge. |
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TJ your being to serious... I not looking ta him being a good leader...but what IF the producers decided to make the Condor G-1. Wouldn't the outcomes and conflicts be even more interesting!
And Red Impulse was Joes long lost father!!! LOL
Joe run's up to Red Impulse who just about to go and save the world...
Jun calls out..."Joe...he's your father!!!"
Joe grimaces as he looks into the eyes of the man he search for since he was four years old.
"I'm sorry son..." RI's eyes brimming with tears. "I felt I couldn't be a father to you..."
Joe's eyes narrow and darken... "You F@$* Bastard!!" He yells. "You were right under my nose all along...F@#@ You!!!"
"But Joe... you wanted to ger revenge for his death." Ken says scratching his head in confusion at Joe's reaction. "Why don't you give him a hug?"
"That mongrel doesn't deserve a hug," Joe hissed and he violently balls his right hand into a fist to take out the old man.
He hits RI sending him flying into the rocket...
RI in a dazed state accidently hits the big red take off button...Now he has no choice he has to save the world." Bloody kid, he has to learn to control that temper." RI fumes...
A few moments later as the team watch the rocket leave the shelter...
"You know jun, thanks for that, I've waited fourteen years to kick his butt for taking off and leaving me and mum with no money and a shack that a dog wouldn't live in..."
Joe is still calming down..he keeps balling his fists as his chest heaves from the emotions running rapidly through his body.
"Maybe I shouldn't have hit him. He is dad after all, he just pisses me off so much some times, and that was the last straw..." He says to Ken in hindsight. Folds his arms and sighs heavily... "Now I'll have to go and revenge his death I suppose..."
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08-10-2008 00:24
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clouddancer
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I am an Owl.
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quote: | Originally posted by Ebonyswanne
Joe run's up to Red Impulse who just about to go and save the world...
Jun calls out..."Joe...he's your father!!!"
Joe grimaces as he looks into the eyes of the man he search for since he was four years old.
"I'm sorry son..." RI's eyes brimming with tears. "I felt I couldn't be a father to you..."
Joe's eyes narrow and darken... "You F@$* Bastard!!" He yells. "You were right under my nose all along...F@#@ You!!!"
"But Joe... you wanted to ger revenge for his death." Ken says scratching his head in confusion at Joe's reaction. "Why don't you give him a hug?"
"That mongrel doesn't deserve a hug," Joe hissed and he violently balls his right hand into a fist to take out the old man.
He hits RI sending him flying into the rocket...
RI in a dazed state accidently hits the big red take off button...Now he has no choice he has to save the world." Bloody kid, he has to learn to control that temper." RI fumes...
A few moments later as the team watch the rocket leave the shelter...
"You know jun, thanks for that, I've waited fourteen years to kick his butt for taking off and leaving me and mum with no money and a shack that a dog wouldn't live in..."
Joe is still calming down..he keeps balling his fists as his chest heaves from the emotions running rapidly through his body.
"Maybe I shouldn't have hit him. He is dad after all, he just pisses me off so much some times, and that was the last straw..." He says to Ken in hindsight. Folds his arms and sighs heavily... "Now I'll have to go and revenge his death I suppose..." |
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I really like this Ebony.
Only, IMO, I do not think it would progress this far. For some reason I think RI would have acknowledged Joe as his son much earlier, both of them being of the same temperament. I think RI would have enjoyed seeing Joe as leader over Ken and would have praised and assisted the team more, instead of the demeaning way he did treat them.
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