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Ebonyswanne Ebonyswanne is a Female
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The third part and final of the story...

Ken goes out on his normal mail run and finds himself in an unusual storm...When gets back to his Shack later that day everything has changed..

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I's a great story Ebonyswanne!

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Yes, ITA with Meg! Lightening was fantastic!!

It was wonderful how you brought in so many different elements and how everything came together in the end. The story was filled with adventure, drama, angst, romance.... All of it wonderfully orchestrated and written.

I Bowdown to you, Ebony! This story is one that I will always remember.

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Blushing Thank you for the compliments...Even though I got a bit impatient to finish it, I enjoyed writing it.

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Sooo that's why the Eagle never liked Ego when he got back in his own dimension.... You could have skipped a little on Blueboy's death scene!

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And leave out a vital part of the story!!!!

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And leave out a vital part of the story!!!!


you could at least give the hope that he was going to live in the normal dimension!

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Why...he was a baddie and with Galactor. Why would I wish for a good ending for him...

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Why...he was a baddie and with Galactor. Why would I wish for a good ending for him...


Because you're on the goodie side and you're supposed the be forgiving! And because it's Ego I love! Erm2

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The story wasn't about Ego.

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ITA, Ego came to an appropriate end, given his actions. I think he was in the story just the right amount. If anything, it was poor Sammie Pandora who never had her storyline concluded!

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TJ is was the only lose end that I felt I could have tied up better in the story, generally I cover them all, but I know for next time.

I supose i could have told of Kens surprise at meeting Pandora as Dr.Nambu's new assistant and the later realization that Gel Sadra was actually Sammie...

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ITA, Ego came to an appropriate end, given his actions. I think he was in the story just the right amount. If anything, it was poor Sammie Pandora who never had her storyline concluded!


She could still had given him a better end! #miffed# And yes, Sammie's character could have been a little more developped, but that loose tie is necessary to explain her later evolution!

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Its ok AMY i believe u, I dont know what ur talking about, but i cant stand to see a evil dewer down and about! horse

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Its ok AMY i believe u, I dont know what ur talking about, but i cant stand to see a evil dewer down and about! horse


Ego, the blue villain from Fighter. He's just to sexy to have him killed!

See?

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Gunman just look at Amy's avatar.

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Yeah, see? He's sexy!

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