I have so many plots in that ficcie(Lightening) I think I have out done myself!
I think I will have to clarify more what is going on between the three main birdies (Eagle, Condor,Swan) earlier than I wanted too just so it doesn't confuse the reader, I found that I have expose more of a character who is not acting the way you would expect her too....
I will post the next chapters once I have the plot twists for the dimension he is in ties up well and is hole proof, because then the rest of the underlying story comes it to play and the final plot twist in the story...
No It is not predicable as to how he leaves this dimension or what happens...I just have to make sure I am doing it right so it makes sense!
I am working on it though with help!
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29-08-2007 09:16
Firebird
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I am sure it will turn out well Ebony
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