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SJ_SwanJun SJ_SwanJun is a Female
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Oh I think that's the name of it.

I read this effing brilliant piece of work today, but managed to lose the link and ability to review when my computer up and got pissy on me.

Anyhoo ... I didn't read who the author was, but remembered the name. I hope to heck they're a Gatchamaniac so I can tell them how absolutely bloody AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOME it was.

If anyone knows who wrote this delicious story, please pass along huge kudos from me.

What an awesome idea ... So brilliantly put together that I could actually believe that Riga existed and that the Jitana (oh I hope I remembered that right) was a real natural transition...

I always love BotP stuff, love it even more when there is Mark and Princess goodness. Add to that intense passion, need, want, and a glorious amount of smut ... and fuck, what more could a reader like me want??

Loved it, absolutely loved it. Abso-fucking-lutely loved it. Like #1 smut read this year!

Please kiddies ... tell me how to find it again, and who wrote it so I can gush in their direction!!

SJ

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It's by our TJ!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4065879/1/Evolution

It is so good, isn't it!

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Oh thank you thank you thank you!!!!!

I am so bookmarking this baby! I am going to snuggle up to it and keep it all to myself!!!

So go away everyone. ... This is mine mine mine!!!

Oh TJ, if you find this thread please know that ... God I loved this.

Oh you know what .... it's on FF.net ... going to review!!

:bolts off to R & R:

SJ

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Oh I think that's the name of it.

I read this effing brilliant piece of work today, but managed to lose the link and ability to review when my computer up and got pissy on me.

Anyhoo ... I didn't read who the author was, but remembered the name. I hope to heck they're a Gatchamaniac so I can tell them how absolutely bloody AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESOME it was.

If anyone knows who wrote this delicious story, please pass along huge kudos from me.

What an awesome idea ... So brilliantly put together that I could actually believe that Riga existed and that the Jitana (oh I hope I remembered that right) was a real natural transition...

I always love BotP stuff, love it even more when there is Mark and Princess goodness. Add to that intense passion, need, want, and a glorious amount of smut ... and fuck, what more could a reader like me want??

Loved it, absolutely loved it. Abso-fucking-lutely loved it. Like #1 smut read this year!

Please kiddies ... tell me how to find it again, and who wrote it so I can gush in their direction!!

SJ


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I am so bookmarking this baby! I am going to snuggle up to it and keep it all to myself!!!

So go away everyone. ... This is mine mine mine!!!

Oh TJ, if you find this thread please know that ... God I loved this.

Oh you know what .... it's on FF.net ... going to review!!

:bolts off to R & R:

SJ



LOL, glad you liked it, SJ!

Pssst.... if you read it on the Archives, Springie added a wonderful picture to chapter 17.

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Mrrrooowwrrr to the picture alright!! LOL!!

I believe the archives is where I read it the first time. But it cut off after that picture, so I figured that was the end. I was surprised at the abruptness of the ending, but loved it just the same.

Then when I just caught the link from IL, lo and behold MORE FIC!!!!!!!!

I swooned in my review only until Chap 17 ... therefore I have more to read now, and can give you something a little better than what I gave you. There is more ... yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

This is awesome!

I did not know you wrote BotP!!!!

SJ

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I did not know you wrote BotP!!!!


I have a bunch of BOTP fics! I know you've read some of them (No More Games, Prom Night). My big On the Run series (that I published at the end of last year) was BOTP too. My current fic I'm working on is Gatch, though.

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... Ashamed

I do recall those fics, and I do love them muchly ... Prom Night is one of my favs!!

Oh how embarrassing... I always thought you were a Gatch girl for some reason. Yet do I associate those fics with you? Well yeah, I do... So why do I still see you as gatch?

I'm a fucktard, what can I say?

I'm absolutely going to flip through your fics this weekend and catch up with all your work.

On the Run, eh? I think I might have to go check that out!

SJ

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TJ's done some fun BOTP's ficcies!

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Definitely check out "On the Run" SJ! It kept me on the edge of my seat! I love TJ's writing so much! Bounce2

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Oh God, Springie ... I spend all yesterday reading that story.

Wow.

Just. Oh. Wow.

I left a review over at ff.net, but reviewed as a whole rather that bit-by-bit... I hope that's okay. I should have reviewed as I went, but I didn't want to interrupt my reading energy and the sting of an awesome story by stopping to comment.

I just loved that so much! She's got a wonerful, wonderful, wonderful mind ... Not to mention execution, too. HAving a brilliant idea is one thing, but getting it down effectively? Damn, she's got it mastered!!

I'm going to swin around her fic folder for a while now and enjoy everything she has to offer!

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Glad you enjoyed that series, SJ! It took me the better part of last year to write it. I think it's my first novel! ;-) I'm glad you think that i was able to explain everything. That's one of the issues I worked really hard on. I wrote up the entire background story first, then the rest of the story around it, to ensure that it would be consistent.

I'm not sure I'll ever be able to write anything that lives up to this!

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You'll say something like that and then you'll go and write something just as good!!!

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