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Posted by clouddancer on 17-01-2008 at 17:38:

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Originally posted by Toneman

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Originally posted by clouddancer

"Lets go to bed dear."

And a month later, "Darling, I have something to tell you. Remember that night we went to bed together? Well ... I am pregnant."

And then eight months later "Congratulations, you have a son!" [/i] Big Grin

Now Back to cloud. This is the kind of behavior I'm talking about. How can you justify this???

Hey! at least he was not impotent. devillook

I wonder if RI would have reacted differently if he had a daughter?

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Posted by clouddancer on 17-01-2008 at 17:49:

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Originally posted by Toneman
Good point. But it's still not an excuse for your behavior.

And which behaviour is that Tone?

My want of romantic smut, or my despise of RI.

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Posted by amyltrer on 17-01-2008 at 19:03:

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Originally posted by Hinotori

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Originally posted by Toneman

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(In my universe, Mark is not Cronus' son.)

Well, My dear, it would appear that your universe is quite fu*ked up indeed.....

That explains it....

That explains eveything....
:: Pulls out notepad, and begins scribbling::

Tone! That's not nice! Be good and play nice with your little ninja friends! Or you'll be going straight to bed without any Eagle bashing!

<Hino pulls out her whip.>

Kinky

And I mean it, Mister!! Kinky

Hino, that's not a way to talk to your father! Hmph somebody should teach the Eagle some respect! Wouldn't you agree, Tone?

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Posted by amyltrer on 17-01-2008 at 19:04:

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Originally posted by clouddancer

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Originally posted by Toneman

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Now Back to cloud. This is the kind of behavior I'm talking about. How can you justify this???

Hey! at least he was not impotent. devillook

I wonder if RI would have reacted differently if he had a daughter?

Stupid idea!

What if RI was the Swan's father and Nambu the one of Ken's? Banana

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Posted by clouddancer on 17-01-2008 at 19:18:

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Originally posted by amyltrer

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Originally posted by Hinotori

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Originally posted by Toneman

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(In my universe, Mark is not Cronus' son.)

Well, My dear, it would appear that your universe is quite fu*ked up indeed.....

That explains it....

That explains eveything....
:: Pulls out notepad, and begins scribbling::

Tone! That's not nice! Be good and play nice with your little ninja friends! Or you'll be going straight to bed without any Eagle bashing!

<Hino pulls out her whip.>

Kinky

And I mean it, Mister!! Kinky

Hino, that's not a way to talk to your father! Hmph somebody should teach the Eagle some respect! Wouldn't you agree, Tone?

Have you not been reading the threads Amy, Tone lays no claim to being the Eagles father. He is not RI he keeps reminding us of that.

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Posted by clouddancer on 17-01-2008 at 19:20:

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Originally posted by amyltrer

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Originally posted by clouddancer

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Originally posted by Toneman

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Now Back to cloud. This is the kind of behavior I'm talking about. How can you justify this???

Hey! at least he was not impotent. devillook

I wonder if RI would have reacted differently if he had a daughter?

Stupid idea!

What if RI was the Swan's father and Nambu the one of Ken's? Banana

Now that would be an interesting ficcie idea Amy.
I have other rangers as the Swans and Owls father. Why not RI himself. Hmmmm!

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Posted by Toneman on 17-01-2008 at 19:41:

I can see it now.

Ken finds out that Red Impulse is his father.
Ken and Jun are finally intimate after years of secretly loving each other.

Jun, later finds out that Red Impulse is her father, as well.

You take it from there.....

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Posted by Springie on 17-01-2008 at 21:28:

Ugh! *CHOKE* *WHEEZE* *GASP*

THE HORROR!!!

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Posted by clouddancer on 17-01-2008 at 21:39:

Kind of what I did Springie.
Then I decided ****NOT IN MY UNIVERSE****

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Posted by Hinotori on 18-01-2008 at 00:41:

Once again, I only have one thing to say to this....

EWWW! Gross!!!!

But as an aside, did you hear about the couple in England who got married, and then found out that they were actually twins separated at birth?? Let me see if I can find the article....

Ah, here it is...

Clickie

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Posted by Hinotori on 18-01-2008 at 00:46:

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Originally posted by amyltrer
What if RI was the Swan's father

Ok, and here's the really scary part...I thought the same thing! Does this mean Amy's finally infiltrated my mind?? Swannies, if I start mentioning how villains with blue skin are cute, I want you to beat me into submission.

Wait, I changed my mind... Don't beat me, just keep showing me pics of the Eagle until I come back to my senses... Luvu 5

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Posted by clouddancer on 18-01-2008 at 00:49:

I am sure I could find a few pics of nekid Eagles to bring you around much faster.

Do you need them now, before you fall or should I save them till later? Big Grin

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Posted by Hinotori on 18-01-2008 at 01:01:

Why wait until it's too late?? Bring them on Cloudy!!

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Posted by Toneman on 18-01-2008 at 02:19:

And once again, ladies and gentlemen, we have smut....

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Posted by clouddancer on 18-01-2008 at 03:45:

I do not see any smut ....... yet Inverted1

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 18-01-2008 at 17:45:

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Originally posted by clouddancer
So now I guess this fic is not JUST about smut anymore.
Especially if RI and his arranged marriage are being brought into it.
I know how much TJ just loves RI, so I can not imagine her writing smut for him.

ewwwww .... Cloud gives a shake. Not sure I can even imagine smut for him.

Well... see.... there's this horrible thing called PLOT that rears its ugly head. It's all well and good to have smut, but WHY are the characters having the smut? How does everyone else react to it? Hence, the story. That's basically all Inhibitions was. A big bunch of setup as to WHY there was smut, having Ken react it it, and then resolving the initial reason the smut was there. Oh yeah, and mission filler to have time pas. And ltos of smut. Of course.

This one is similar in that way, although what's so funny is that I hand wrote 36 pages befre I even gt to smut, and that wasn't 'real' smut, because I had to explain WHY the smut was (going to) happen(ing). And what's even sadder is that when I came up with the idea I explained it to Springie in 2 words. But this is 26 handwritten pages to explain in the fic. Sad... I have a problem.

As for RI... nope, no smut for him! He had one lucky time and tha's al he gets. It's more than he deserves, don't you think? Wink

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 18-01-2008 at 17:46:

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Originally posted by kimiko
But it's still smut....granted a "rubbernecking at the gory hwy accident that no matter how sickening and disturbing a site it is you still look at it" kind of smut. Eek4

Bwaaaaa haaaa haaaa..... Kimi, tha's perfect! es, that's EXACTLY how I'd imagine it.... Not that I'd want to imagine it.... Ugh...

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 18-01-2008 at 17:48:

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Originally posted by Toneman
Uh- oh..... Maybe I bit off more than I could chew..

Nah....

Toneman! Play nice! We Swannies don't like it when the RIs pick on others!!!!!!!! paddling

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 18-01-2008 at 17:51:

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Originally posted by clouddancer
I wonder if RI would have reacted differently if he had a daughter?

You know, I've talked about this a fair bit with Summer39. Not RI having a daughter, but how he views women. In her AU, Cronus was a total sexist pig. He felt that the kind of girl you should marry was a high class debutante who was good for nothing but bearing your children and decorating your arm at official functions. He thought that sexual release should be obtained with prostitutes and one night stands. I can TOTALLY se this in the RI/Cronus character, what with the arrogance he displays, and to some extent, I know it has influenced my view of him.

Sooooo.... based on that, if RI ahd a daughter, I think he'd want her to be the debutante type. Quiet, shy, retiring, looking upon her father as God, and making a socially acceptable marriage.

*shudder* Eek2

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Posted by clouddancer on 18-01-2008 at 19:06:

Hmmmm!
An interesting idea, TJ. I look forward to more to more discussion on this when you return.

Like what, specifically, lead you to this idea. (Is there a specific instance you can point to.)
And why I missed it when I watched.

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