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Posted by amyltrer on 02-10-2007 at 19:42:

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Originally posted by clouddancer

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Originally posted by amyltrer

Tj, I always get embarrassed when I re-read my smuts! Biglaugh1

Horny Gallactor I am!

I get embarrassed reading my stories and poems to.

I get angry when doing that! There's so many mistakes there! But I won't care if someone says the don't like it!

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 02-10-2007 at 22:51:

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Originally posted by amyltrer

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Originally posted by clouddancer

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Originally posted by amyltrer

Tj, I always get embarrassed when I re-read my smuts! Biglaugh1

Horny Gallactor I am!

I get embarrassed reading my stories and poems to.

I get angry when doing that! There's so many mistakes there! But I won't care if someone says the don't like it!

Don't get to hung up on the errors, you overlook them anyway when you get into a good story, I do when I read other peoples work. I just want to know if the plot is good, I care so much more about that in a story...the telling of it!

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 02-10-2007 at 23:20:

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Originally posted by amyltrer
TJ, that old smurffster doesn't look like Ego! Yuck!

Hey, it was the best I could do! Maybe with a shave.... Smurf

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 02-10-2007 at 23:21:

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Originally posted by amyltrer
Tj, I always get embarrassed when I re-read my smuts! Biglaugh1

Horny Gallactor I am!

I know how you feel. It took me a long time to get used to reading my own smut. Sometimes I'm still kind of embarrassed by what I've written...

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 02-10-2007 at 23:22:

ITA with Ebony. The hardest part is the plot. The grammar/spelling stuff is fixable, but if you can't get a plot together you're nowhere. Ihave read so many wonderful stories where I forget about all of the grammar and spelling, just because I am enjoying the story so much!

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Posted by clouddancer on 03-10-2007 at 01:54:

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Originally posted by Ebonyswanne
Don't get too hung up on the errors, you overlook them anyway when you get into a good story, I do when I read other peoples work. I just want to know if the plot is good, I care so much more about that in a story...the telling of it!

The plot is what I worry about more. I worry that what I am writing does not have enough detail, feels like other people have already said it, or that I am rushing what I want the characters to say and not giving enough information of what is happening around them or what they are doing.

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 03-10-2007 at 02:55:

FWIW, I think you did just fine, CD! I'm not an expert, but I liked what I read! I would have told you if I thought you were rushing things.

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Posted by clouddancer on 03-10-2007 at 03:04:

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Originally posted by Transmute Jun
FWIW, I think you did just fine, CD! I'm not an expert, but I liked what I read! I would have told you if I thought you were rushing things.

Well I have made a few more adjustments since you read it so you can look at it and see if you like the changes.

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 03-10-2007 at 03:15:

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Originally posted by clouddancer

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Originally posted by Transmute Jun
FWIW, I think you did just fine, CD! I'm not an expert, but I liked what I read! I would have told you if I thought you were rushing things.

Well I have made a few more adjustments since you read it so you can look at it and see if you like the changes.

I have, and I do!!!! thumbsup2

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