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Posted by Transmute Jun on 12-09-2007 at 21:58:
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Are you saying that I am fickle and shallow?
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Yay!!!!!!!!
FTR, CD, I like having you around the boards no matter what. But having more fics to read just makes me oh so excited!
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Posted by clouddancer on 12-09-2007 at 22:13:
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Please, TJ I hope you know I don't mean that.
I would
if I really thought you did.
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 12-09-2007 at 22:43:
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I know you don't... I was j/k....
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Posted by clouddancer on 13-09-2007 at 00:45:
Cloud gives a dramatic big sigh. 
I would never want to upset the person who has been spending so much time boosting my ego.
And writing such nice smuty and angsty stories. giggle
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 13-09-2007 at 01:27:
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Awwwww.....
I guess I'll just have to keep writing those smutty and angsty stories, then. 
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Posted by clouddancer on 13-09-2007 at 02:21:
Keep it up TJ, then I can keep praising your writing. 
BTW I enjoyed today's three chapters of Nice.
I like how you use the flash backs to deepen the angst.
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 13-09-2007 at 02:41:
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Well, as you say, that's good motivation...
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Anything to deepen the angst...
Don't worry, tomorrow the angst will begin anew... As if it ever really stopped. Can you see now why this one took so long to write?
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Posted by clouddancer on 13-09-2007 at 02:47:
That and the fact that your stories are much longer than mine.
Many, many pages longer than mine.
But, maybe mine will get longer the more I write.
Or maybe me being an Owl of few words will keep my stories shorter.
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 13-09-2007 at 03:50:
LOL... I have a problem with brevity. I can't just write a scene, I have to have all of the setup and everything that goes with it... it can take awhile. Just look at Springie is in the Air. That was supposed to be Ken/Jun PWP... and I spent 10 pages just setting up the smut!!!
It's a sickness, I tell you...
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Posted by Firebird on 13-09-2007 at 11:55:
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An incurable one I hope as I love your fics
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 13-09-2007 at 13:30:
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And they do tend to go on and on and on and on...
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Posted by clouddancer on 13-09-2007 at 14:28:
but you use words so well.
The stories do not feel like they are going on and on.
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Posted by Firebird on 13-09-2007 at 17:14:
ITA Cd they dont have that feel, in fact they leave you wanting to know what happens next!"
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Posted by clouddancer on 13-09-2007 at 17:49:
Or wanting more........
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 13-09-2007 at 21:49:
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It's good to start with a few short ones!
I guess it just depends on the story.
I like flashbacks in a story at times, it deepens the plot and the content of the story...
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Posted by amyltrer on 13-09-2007 at 22:16:
Yup, CD, short stories are much more easier to write, and you don't need a whole plot and the action can spin around a small event.
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Posted by clouddancer on 13-09-2007 at 22:30:
I have started writing a continuation of the story I will post. Or another point of view. It gives some background to my world in it. It is not really a flashback, not as I think of them anyway, just the Chief talking to Cronus and bringing up information in conversation.
He has revealed a lot of information but I can not get the story to where I want it, or to where I thought it was going. So am now trying to decide if I should leave it for a bit, try to force it to where I want it, or let it take its own course.
I am going to look at it later tonight and then see what I decide.
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 14-09-2007 at 03:34:
Let it go where you feel most comfortable CD. You don't want to force anything.
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 14-09-2007 at 03:37:
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You guys are so sweet! And because you are, I posted more...
Okay, I would have posted more anyhow, but it makes me feel wonderful to know that you are reading it and enjoying it!
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Posted by clouddancer on 14-09-2007 at 15:39:
No I do not want to force it. But I do want to make it go where I want to.
I know how I want it to end. It is taking that last step to get there that is the problem.
I know what Anderson and Cronus finish up saying, it is how I get the conversation there that I am having problems with.
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