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Posted by UnpublishedWriter on 13-04-2010 at 22:26:
Uh-oh, Littlewolf! TJ got out her pokey stick. She's serious. 
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Posted by clouddancer on 13-04-2010 at 22:52:
No TJ is not serious until she uses multiply pokey sticks and maybe a whip or two.
One pokey stick is just a warning, especially on new members.
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Posted by UnpublishedWriter on 14-04-2010 at 00:56:
Well, I respond to the single pokey-stick.
Methinks the Condor may be in for some trouble from Littlewolf. Will it be welcome trouble, or not?
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 14-04-2010 at 01:37:
Whoo hoo! UW is responding to the pokey stick!
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Posted by clouddancer on 14-04-2010 at 01:42:
Maybe it is only us placid Owls who take more prodding to get us writing and posting. 
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Posted by UnpublishedWriter on 14-04-2010 at 02:45:
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No, I'll leave that to Littlewolf. She has the rainy, the naked Condor, and [CENSORED]
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Posted by littlewolf on 14-04-2010 at 09:54:
Sticks and stones may brusie my bones
but those wipes and chains...... mmm!
okay I'm thinking , will the condor kiss my brusies better after the pokeing stick - cause a girl has needs!
and no I will be very gently on the condor...unless he has been a very naught boy/man and then he will go over my knee for a well deserved spanking!
another story in itself Q do I leave my mask one and remain mysterious...?
Definately Yes! it will drive him crazy with lust (hopefully) better have armour peircing body armour just in case
Okay I'm thinking, can't just be lust must have plot, substance, a story line
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Posted by littlewolf on 14-04-2010 at 10:07:
posting a story
Okay wild thought
wrote a fragmented story years and years ago,( it's not that long), that I may be able to change to add Joe to.
actualy it's a debate if it is Joe or ken, how do I go about doing this?
As it is my first , would it be best if I posted it for feedback and help?
so I can tweek it before doing a final draft for someone to proof read
love to hear feedback from those who have read and posted stories on line
feeling nervouse/nausious
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Posted by Madilayn on 14-04-2010 at 10:14:
What you're asking for a a beta, Littlewolf, and we all are very happy to beta around here.
The board to post it in is the one called The Writers Block. Just create a new thread for it in that sub-board and we're all happy to give you help.
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Posted by littlewolf on 14-04-2010 at 10:22:
Big Thanks
okay just gotta remember were the story is
hopefully will have a draft posted in next few days. 
I'm a happy little banana bender
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Posted by Madilayn on 14-04-2010 at 10:29:
Yay!!! Just gotta say that Littlewolf only lives about 1 hour drive south of me! We have gotta meetup, babe!
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 14-04-2010 at 14:27:
Looking forward to seeing your story, Littlewolf!
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Let me be the third !!!
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Posted by littlewolf on 15-04-2010 at 10:45:
I posted my first fragmented story
okay feel the need to up chuk now.
anyway went searching found writing from late 80's. oh i feel old
stayed up late writing something totaly different, and I just posted it,
have potentially 7 more fragmented stories to write plus one i was thinking about on the way to work ,was good to , if only i could remember it , must talk digitall recorder with me when driving, its so hard to write behind the wheel
okay looking forward to honest feedback
gotta go now need alcohol to quiet nerves
ps no more stick poking the stories just started oozing out and wouldn't leave me alone when I was suppose to be working
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Posted by Madilayn on 15-04-2010 at 11:01:
Stories oozing at inapproapriate times is something tht most of us here know about.
I actually had one of my favorite written pieces (and I think one of my best- "Phoenix") as I walked the 600m from where I parked my car to my workplace!
Then I did a mad scribble as the computer turned on and I logged in and a very naughty couple of hours getting it down so tht I wouldn't forget!
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Posted by littlewolf on 15-04-2010 at 11:45:
paranoid story poster
okay - haven't had alcohol, there no chocolate in the house
no one said anything about my story post - is that a good thing, I Know its only been a hour or so<
I forgot to ask was I allowed to swear in that forum?
or am i being overly paranoid only a few people have ever read my stories???!!!
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Posted by Madilayn on 15-04-2010 at 11:47:
Most of the board members are at work (US and UK) so it's only the four or so Aussies who are around at the moment.
We all take fic seriously here - so prefer to give constructive criticism rather than what first comes to mind.
Don't worry - people will comment and their comments will be better for taking the time to go through it a few times.
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Posted by green on 15-04-2010 at 11:57:
I agree with Maddy, Littlewolf.
I've read your stories and are allowing them to settle in my brain - they're much darker than my usual choice.
Don't take that as I don't like them - I do. I think you have something worth working on.
I just don't want to advise you in the wrong direction - especially when there are far more experienced fic writers around here who are more to break them down for you.
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Posted by littlewolf on 15-04-2010 at 12:17:
big thanks
okay I'm going to log of and turn of the computer
maybe work on a few other stories
actually can I use you as a sounding board?
(not waiting for a reply)
Thinking about a story from little wolf alter ego Danger Mouse (DM) case notes on fellow earth defenders Gforce/Gatchaman - from point
basically other superheros / spies / agencies have some serious concerns about the mental heath of above mentioned, eg PTSD, co-dependancy, substance abuse, tendancy to excessive violence, absent father figures , no female involvement in upbringing, a man, often absent, who adopted 5 young children Questionable in itself (sexual overtones), avoid specific answers to children support agencys, has high if not destructive expectaions on children, who are subjectid to excessive physical and mental training, often left to own divises, untested scientific experiemntation, delibrate isolation and openly encorages them to lead a double life, frequently expose to masacistic, narcasistic persons, frequest and exeplained injures, frequest truancy from school etc
need to find councelling, pyc and social profilling books and notes as well as cross refereance between medical dictionary and disease profiling and anatamy and pysiology text bookd (always knew these courses would come in handy, plus need to find my triage notes and rescue notes)
Has something like this been writen about before?
will I upset other fans by writtin something like this?
how deep can I go??
we have 5 children who are trained to defend at extream measures, can they honestly intgrate them self into normal mainstream or must they be isolated after the war is over?
what if they kill once in civilian mode who is resonsible for that, can they actually be charge and go to prison?
OOZZING my brain is bring up what if all over the place
okay need to log off now - got to go and write , all else fails it will get filed with my other stories and I Can amend the characters to fit non Gatch/ Botp stories
excuse spelling in the sceme of things the stories is more important than first presenation
and spelling was never my strong point, does this site have a spell check, oh well cut and paste it is
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