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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 13-01-2008 at 08:48:
Thats what I was thinking even after I read the part!!!!
Oh there is more story here Eva...I thing about twists in plots as you might have guessed already about me...
There is still something different in the Eagles behaviour from what I got from the last part of the story...
I have to admit I love to brainstorm over plots...so please excuse me if I get carried away when I like a story. 
I just like things that are not all that they seem at times...
Oh what if Jun did was in love with him like it is projected in the series and she finds out he has a girlfriend and gets jealous(I love the Swan, but girls can get jealous when the man they want is with another woman...even nice girls, which makes it more impacting actually.) And Joe is onto him, like you gave the impression that he didn't believe that Ken when he lied to them all...ooohhhh!!! Bad deceptive Ken...angry Condor...jealous Swan and clueless Owl and a suspicious Swallow!!!!
Here I go again!!! 
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Posted by Evangelina on 14-01-2008 at 08:19:
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Let's see what I get for the fic swap over on the BotP board, but I'm starting to feel the urge to write you a Swannie story where the girl ends up with one of the boys.
I have actually thought off and on for YEARS about writing one in which the Swan decides she's tired of being the sweet submissive girl on the team and takes charge with Ken and everyone else.
And Ken realizes that is soooooo HOT.
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I think it's really sweet. And fun! Keep going!
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Me too.
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You did read Two Factor Theory and The Pulse Plan, right?
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I see Joe as not wanting to know the whole truth because if he knows it he'll have to do something about it. But I set up something pretty intense when I wrote that Joe had found something he hated as much as Galactor. That's serious, baybee! But I don't write what don't feel "true" to me, so...
I see Joe somehow discovering Aleksandra's secret, and Ken's collusion with that. And Joe seeing that as complete betrayal of the team, working with the enemy, if you will, especially since he now associates the Vampire Nation with Galactor. (And of course that splinter that will ally with Galactor still exists. Perhaps that alliance has gone through and now things are more obvious to the world at large.)
I don't see Joe going after Ken with permanent damage in mind, but I can see him deciding to remove Aleksandra and thereby get Ken's head back in the game.
(Does anybody watch Supernatural? There's a Hunter named Gordon whose sister was turned by a vampire, and he killed her rather than accept that his sister had changed in any way. He has a tendency to go after Sam, and Dean [Sam's brother] won't let Gordon touch Sam, because as much as Dean hates monsters, he loves Sam more. So even when Sam has had the potential to become a monster or something less than human, Dean has never abandoned him, even if it would have meant his own life. I see Ken and Joe having that kind of brotherhood, and I think the episode where Joe kills Father Alan rather than let him hurt Ken exemplifies that. Hope that rather long explanation makes sense.)
Eva
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 14-01-2008 at 08:38:
Your very good at this Eva!!!
You think your stories through well
It was my warped sense of humour taking over a bit then...it happens occasionally.Some times I just don't take things seriously enough and it gets me into all sorts of trouble...*cheeky grin* 
I suppose it's what happens when you work in a retail lingerie shop for years, and it has a Hanky Panky section...along with the sexy dress up outfits...you should see some of the stuff the buyers get in...talk about kink!!!
I haven't read those stories, but I like your idea of the Swan getting fed up with the boys and taking charge!!!
It will be interesting to see what story you get from the BOTP site fic swap...good luck with that!
And I could see Joe going after Aleksandra too if he found she was a vampire, he'd still smack Ken for lying to him, but then Joe's one for keeping secrets as well isn't he.
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Posted by clouddancer on 14-01-2008 at 13:18:
Ohh, Eva I am so with you on that brotherhood relationship between Ken and Joe.
Willing to kill to protect each other.(Although they are already killers but...) This is where I came up with the feeling that Ken can be just as angry and vicious as Joe.
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Posted by Springie on 14-01-2008 at 21:07:
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Let's see what I get for the fic swap over on the BotP board, but I'm starting to feel the urge to write you a Swannie story where the girl ends up with one of the boys.
I have actually thought off and on for YEARS about writing one in which the Swan decides she's tired of being the sweet submissive girl on the team and takes charge with Ken and everyone else.
And Ken realizes that is soooooo HOT.
Ohhhh, baby... that would soooooo make my day...no, my week...no, maybe my year, even!!
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 14-01-2008 at 22:00:
Springie are you in the fic swap as well as Eva???
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 14-01-2008 at 22:02:
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I see it more in the screen caps from fighter Ken's real anger taking over him...but he does look at Joe as his brother, I guess everyone takes that as a given.
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Posted by Springie on 14-01-2008 at 22:12:
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Yes, I am...and so is TJ...
I am so doomed...the part of my brain used for writing is totally numb...the picture part of my brain took over...I'm hoping it will all come back to me...ugh....
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 15-01-2008 at 05:59:
Thats one of the reason I didn't go in it, I figured I didn't want to muck up a good idea that someone gave me...but I can't wait to see what other people produce.
Good luck Springie and Eva.
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Posted by kimiko on 15-01-2008 at 15:33:
Eva this was great! So entertaining and riveting. I'm a vampire fan too and Lost Boys is one of my favs, along with the half a tree's worth of Anne Rice novels I've got!
I can see Joe going after Aleksandra, but I can also see him stopping short of killing her because of her desire to become human again. To me they have much in common. Both are a product of something they hate and were forced or had no control of and they are trying to make ammends, Joe by defeating Galactor and Aleksandra by finding a cure.
Looking for more....where's Part 1 again?
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Posted by clouddancer on 15-01-2008 at 15:45:
Kimi, to find part one:
Go to the fic library here, and then to Eva's name and you will find Negotiations I listed.
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 15-01-2008 at 22:29:
Kimi ITA it's a well written story, She even did some piccies for it in Archives...
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Posted by clouddancer on 19-01-2008 at 00:50:
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Ohhhh Ebony, look what I just found and read.
Was this the vampire story you were thinking of?
another vampire story
It is written by Maya Perez and is posted over at the Gatchaman Archives.
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Posted by clouddancer on 19-01-2008 at 00:54:
Okay that seemed to get the link to work.
Took three tries though. 
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 19-01-2008 at 01:41:
Yep thats it CD!!!! Good work!
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Posted by clouddancer on 19-01-2008 at 02:06:
It was a very powerful story.
She had some very powerful images.
They are still racing though my mind.
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Posted by Evangelina on 19-01-2008 at 17:34:
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Oh Ebony, I would have been proud to have you get my "wish." Besides, what's the most fun about the swap (IMHO) is having to write a story on a particular thing, no excuses. And my request about knocked me over, I was CLUELESS what to do with it when I first got it. That's what's fun, is making it work because it's not an idea you might have had.
CD -- Thank you for finding that other vampire story!
I can't wait to read it and see what another author did with the concept!
Kimi -- Thank you, thank you!! Hope you like Part 1 and my other stuff if you decide to read it!
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Posted by Springie on 19-01-2008 at 18:10:
Hahaha...Eva, I felt the same way when i got my wish...I think I have a rough outline now at least...not sure if it's any good...it's totally something, I've never tried before...of course, i haven't branched out much...most of my stuff is Eagle/ Swan...teehee...
You know, I suspect I may have your wish...just b/c it sounds like you to me...but I can't tell you what it is...
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 20-01-2008 at 05:21:
Eva...I do like a challenge, I guess I'll go in the next one I debated and debated when I read the thread on it as to whether I should go in it, the only challenge I have respond to was one by Firebird(and the story I did was OK, but not well thought out...I did in one afternoon on the fly... I thought so anyway thats why it's only here and on F.fic.)
And TJ's Christmas fic challenge. I have one idea...Just an image of Jun decorating the God Pheonix and she even put up a Christmas tree and the only one who loved it was the Swallow...TJ gave me a shove to do something with it...she has a way of doing that with me and getting a response...like I actually do it...LOL
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Posted by Evangelina on 20-01-2008 at 07:29:
Well, Springie, if it is mine you got...sorry for giving you a tough one. But not matter whose it is, I can't wait to see what you come up with! 
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I think perhaps if those of us who are doing this one survive it, perhaps we shall have to do another so you can participate, Ebony! I seem to churn out Gatch ff in response to challenges but not other times...
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Well, then we all need to find out TJ's secret with you and add some fuel to the fire!
If we did a fic swap on this board, would you participate? It looks like there are challenges posted on this board fairly frequently, but like I said, a swap has a particular...urgency to it. Or maybe you could help us come up with a super good challenge idea you would be interested in participating in outside of a swap...?
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