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Posted by lyon on 28-04-2010 at 03:14:

the kleenex story aka fallen

Title: "The Kleenex Story", more formally entitled "Fallen"

Rating: Adults only. There is a crap ton of swearing and depictions of major violence.

Description: Emotional angst and turmoil. Written because Sam asked me to "...write something sappy and no, i don't mind if somebody has to get hurt during it."

I totally took her at her word.

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Posted by clouddancer on 16-08-2010 at 15:10:

Lyon, I love the way you write. You describe the scene so clearly I can clearly see everything and feel the angst Joe feels.

I need to see if you have posted my favourite story of yours - Crucible.

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Posted by lyon on 16-08-2010 at 23:42:

I love the way you read!

i have no idea what I posted either... Crucible is one of my favorites too, for what it's worth.

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Posted by clouddancer on 17-08-2010 at 00:12:

No, I don't see Crucible here. I will look forward to you posting it when you get time and if the site will allow.

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Posted by lyon on 17-08-2010 at 21:23:

/salutes

yes, ma'am. sir.

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Posted by clouddancer on 17-08-2010 at 21:40:

I am an Owl, I am meant to salute you my Eagle Friend and salute you I do, and your beautiful writing style. I wish I felt I could write scenes as clearly as you do.

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Posted by lyon on 18-08-2010 at 01:36:

It's not as hard as it looks. Writing clear scenes that is. Play the movie in your head. Write what you see until you run out of words. Then go back and be *ruthless* at chopping away anything that doesn't match *exactly* what you saw/felt/meant to say.

It makes for short stories which means it's harder for the reader to fall asleep in the middle. Although I'm sure some have tried!

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Posted by clouddancer on 18-08-2010 at 01:54:

LOL

I will try to remember that when I try some more writing.

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