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Posted by SJ_SwanJun on 11-11-2008 at 10:50:

Barrdwing's Fic

Barrdwing ... My God!!

That was SENSATIONAL!!!!

Absolutely sensational!!

I love to see things through Tiny's eyes. He is such an underrated character -- but there is character there and HELL you pulled it off wonderfully.

Not scarey? Buddy, I am a Stephen King <salute> girl through and through and this is EXACTLY something I'd expect from one of his short stories.

Gosh, I felt like I was in Maine with Mr. King and reading something from his delightful mind!!!

That said -- Gawwd this is stunning and something I will not only read again and again, but will definitely recommend to EVERYONE!

I was hooked from the first paragraph ... Thank you!!

It makes me want to try a spooky one myself ... But I can't write good ghost stories ...

Thank you again ...

SJ

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Posted by Springie on 11-11-2008 at 11:49:

Loved it Barrdwing! You have such a way with words! You had Tiny down perfectly! I certainly hope you'll be writing more!

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 11-11-2008 at 14:31:

I agree. Barrdwing is a wonderful writer, and she needs to post a few more of her fics! I know she has some older ones that she could share with us... Poke

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Posted by clouddancer on 11-11-2008 at 15:27:

I loved this Fic from Tiny's POV Bardwing. I love that I can see and feel exactly what Tiny does.

Please do keep writing more stories for us.

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Posted by gogirl212 on 11-11-2008 at 15:55:

ITA w/SJ - very Stephen King!

I made the mistake of not heeding the warnings and reading this fic late at night, alone, and right before bed - I had goose bumps it was so creepy! I had to read something sweet and romantic before I could settle down.

A great, great story - and I particularly liked the POV and the voice you created for Tiny. The language style and patterns were valuable extension of his characterization. It wasn't a story about Tiny, it was Tiny's story - nicely done. Looking forward to more!

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Posted by shamrokchick on 11-11-2008 at 18:42:

Link please? Big Grin

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 11-11-2008 at 20:35:

http://www.gatchfanfic.com/viewstory.php?sid=860

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Posted by clouddancer on 11-11-2008 at 21:05:

Ohhhh, you beat me to it TJ.

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Posted by shamrokchick on 11-11-2008 at 22:23:

Thanks ya'll!

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Posted by shamrokchick on 11-11-2008 at 22:54:

Excellent story Barrdwing! It's nice to see the Owl in the spotlight for a change. And your descriptions are great.

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Posted by Barrdwing on 12-11-2008 at 04:54:

Oh wow . . . Biggrins You guys are very kind! I'm very glad that you enjoyed this one: I had a lot of fun writing it, although truth be told I gave myself the creepycrawls while working on the middle section. (Seriously!) I'd figured I was just a wuss, but hearing that SJ and gogirl also found it suitably spooky makes me feel better. Animetongue

TJ is right, there's a backlog of stories that I need to post, plan to post, and will work on posting. I have a couple more ghost stories that are on that list, although one of them still needs overhauling, the pesky thing. <grumble> This is the only story so far from Tiny's POV, but there may be more someday: he's a fun voice to write. Smile


Posted by Transmute Jun on 12-11-2008 at 15:10:

Gooooo Barrdwing! Post, post, post!

I should point out that Barrwing has two other fics on the Fanfic Archives right now. And one is a Condor fic. Condor

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Posted by Hinotori on 14-11-2008 at 00:22:

Barrdwing, I finally read your fic today. Awesome, awesome, awesome!! I love the thriller/"ghostly" aspect and how wonderfully you wrote it from Tiny's perspective. Now that TJ has pointed out that you've posted 2 other fics to Archives, I'm off to read (or at least bookmark) those!

Can't wait to read more of your stories, Barrdwing. You definitely write in a style/category that I thoroughly enjoy!

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Posted by Barrdwing on 14-11-2008 at 04:56:

Thank you, Hinotori! Big Grin


Posted by Cep on 14-11-2008 at 08:30:

Do you need a shelf on the fic library then Barrdwing? twix

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Posted by Barrdwing on 15-11-2008 at 05:23:

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Originally posted by Cep
Do you need a shelf on the fic library then Barrdwing? twix


I guess maybe I do--thanks! Smile Although I'm not very good at posting things on-line . . . still kind of a noob. So it may take me a while to figure things out here (and some bugging of the veteran members!). Animetongue


Posted by Transmute Jun on 15-11-2008 at 06:28:

Don't worry, Barrdwing. I'm sure we can arrange something to help you out. Wink

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Posted by clouddancer on 15-11-2008 at 16:15:

Yes I am sure we can arrange time for TJ to help you. Anything to get more of your stories posted.

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Posted by Barrdwing on 16-11-2008 at 02:09:

Many thanks, TJ! I will be Bigears


Posted by Cep on 19-11-2008 at 10:00:

Your shelf is up Barrdwing, if you need help just let is know Big Grin

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