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Posted by Firebird on 08-09-2008 at 11:43:

Journey back from the darkness - Part 15

sorry its been a while here is the next bit

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 09-09-2008 at 06:17:

Thats an interesting chapter... I liked your descriptions of the accident.

One thing. In such a bad accident how come Princess didn't have any injuries? Even indication of scratches???

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Posted by Firebird on 09-09-2008 at 11:01:

I think I stopped that one at a bad point will see what I mean when I post next chapter but basically the idea was to show she thinks more about Sean than herself and did not even register her injuries.

Only slight mention was her head throbbing.

Hope that made it a little clearer.

FB

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 09-09-2008 at 12:50:

FB, did you post this on the Fanfic Archives? I seem to have a much easier time reading there.

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 10-09-2008 at 00:53:

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Originally posted by Firebird
I think I stopped that one at a bad point will see what I mean when I post next chapter but basically the idea was to show she thinks more about Sean than herself and did not even register her injuries.

Only slight mention was her head throbbing.

Hope that made it a little clearer.

FB


Ahhh so there is more! I thought it seemed incomplete.

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Posted by Firebird on 10-09-2008 at 17:56:

Not Yet TJ will do as soon as I can (have to convert it to html first)

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