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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 24-02-2008 at 05:04:
When Lightening strikes Part 3
The third part and final of the story...
Ken goes out on his normal mail run and finds himself in an unusual storm...When gets back to his Shack later that day everything has changed..
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Posted by meg on 29-02-2008 at 19:47:
I's a great story Ebonyswanne!
Posted by Hinotori on 29-02-2008 at 20:56:
Yes, ITA with Meg! Lightening was fantastic!!
It was wonderful how you brought in so many different elements and how everything came together in the end. The story was filled with adventure, drama, angst, romance.... All of it wonderfully orchestrated and written.
I 
to you, Ebony! This story is one that I will always remember.
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 29-02-2008 at 21:01:
Thank you for the compliments...Even though I got a bit impatient to finish it, I enjoyed writing it.
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Posted by amyltrer on 01-03-2008 at 08:03:
Sooo that's why the Eagle never liked Ego when he got back in his own dimension.... You could have skipped a little on Blueboy's death scene!
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 01-03-2008 at 09:11:
And leave out a vital part of the story!!!!
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Posted by amyltrer on 01-03-2008 at 09:18:
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you could at least give the hope that he was going to live in the normal dimension!
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 02-03-2008 at 03:06:
Why...he was a baddie and with Galactor. Why would I wish for a good ending for him...
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Posted by amyltrer on 02-03-2008 at 09:43:
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Because you're on the goodie side and you're supposed the be forgiving! And because it's Ego I love!
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 02-03-2008 at 21:50:
The story wasn't about Ego.
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Posted by Transmute Jun on 02-03-2008 at 23:52:
ITA, Ego came to an appropriate end, given his actions. I think he was in the story just the right amount. If anything, it was poor Sammie Pandora who never had her storyline concluded!
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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 03-03-2008 at 01:39:
TJ is was the only lose end that I felt I could have tied up better in the story, generally I cover them all, but I know for next time.
I supose i could have told of Kens surprise at meeting Pandora as Dr.Nambu's new assistant and the later realization that Gel Sadra was actually Sammie...
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Posted by amyltrer on 05-03-2008 at 19:00:
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She could still had given him a better end! #miffed# And yes, Sammie's character could have been a little more developped, but that loose tie is necessary to explain her later evolution!
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Posted by Gunman on 06-03-2008 at 16:23:
Its ok AMY i believe u, I dont know what ur talking about, but i cant stand to see a evil dewer down and about! 
Posted by amyltrer on 07-03-2008 at 13:24:
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Ego, the blue villain from Fighter. He's just to sexy to have him killed!
See?
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Posted by kimiko on 07-03-2008 at 13:41:
Gunman just look at Amy's avatar.
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Posted by amyltrer on 07-03-2008 at 14:11:
Yeah, see? He's sexy!
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