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Posted by Firebird on 29-01-2008 at 13:40:

Descent into Darkness - part 8

The story continues and so does the torture.

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 29-01-2008 at 22:40:

FB, this is terrific! I remember when you sent me the outline awhile ago, and this has really turned out wonderfully. I am so involved with the characters, and you are really bringing 'life in the prison' home... i can picture everything happening, and I really feel for the people involved.

I am looking forward to the rest.

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Posted by Firebird on 29-01-2008 at 23:01:

Thank you. I made some adjustments to it and have now split it so I could delve into more detail. Hopefully it comes out right without being too OTT

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 30-01-2008 at 00:04:

It's coming out right. It's horrific, but it describes what she went through so well. You've done an outstanding job on this one. Every scene is so vividly painted! Bowdown

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Posted by Springie on 30-01-2008 at 01:02:

I gotta go read! Outtahere

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 30-01-2008 at 07:52:

Fb your visuals in this are great, I get shivers at times from the treatment of the prisoners, especially in chapter 9 when she begins dreaming..you can sense her fear, and strength as you read it. She's finally admitting a few truths to herself and Sean...

You can see why she was a member of an elite team like G-Force.

By the way...you left me a cliffhanger with Chapter 9...now I'm waiting for Chapter 10!

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Posted by Firebird on 30-01-2008 at 13:26:

part 10 is up for approval and will then be added. Just need to finish a fic for Amy then will email it over to you.

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