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Posted by Firebird on 24-01-2008 at 11:18:

Descent into darkness - part one

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Pleased be aware that in the later part s of this fic there are some potentially distressing moments. Wanted to give the heads up now.

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Posted by Firebird on 24-01-2008 at 19:07:

This fic is the one I was concerned about writing for various reasons but with encouragement I worked at it and am now starting to put it up.

Thank you to those who encouraged it and I hope it is what you hoped it would be.

I thought it best to break this down for two reasons, Firstly it gives me the opportunity to check it over for mistakes and secondly there were new angles and perspectives I wanted to put in to it to try to show the struggle that the swan goes through.

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 24-01-2008 at 22:20:

I'm looking forward to reading it FB, I like stories that make you think a bit at times....

I'm having trouble with the downloading though.

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 24-01-2008 at 22:26:

CEP it goes all incripted when it downloads...this is sooo not fair....

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Posted by clouddancer on 24-01-2008 at 22:54:

I will send this one to you as well Ebony. Smile

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 25-01-2008 at 00:05:

FB WOW..this is very very good, how she ran from what caused her the most hurt to end up in a worse situation. You writing draws you in, it has a deep feel about it and you wonder what is going to happen to her...

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 25-01-2008 at 00:31:

You know I can't stop thinking about that first part...your writing in this is very powerful, and her sadness at how her life turned out after the war...

I'm really interested in seeing how she handles it, and what happens to her. She must feel some betrayal that the federation or Chief Anderson didn't appeal the sentence, and that no one seems to care that she is there at all...Damn Mark! LOL

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Posted by Firebird on 25-01-2008 at 11:53:

Hoping to get part 3 and 4 up later today. To give more insight. No idea how long this will be cant even say If I am half way through lol.

With this the sadness is not just the loss of dreams it is ordeals she goes through that strip away everything she was always perceived to be.

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 25-01-2008 at 12:04:

I can see that here in the first stages....her ideas of what she wanted after the war...it her it must have seemed a lie since Mark married someone else...I'm an left wondering if Jason might have tried to talk her out of taking the posting in such a remote place...but then FB your the one telling this story and I will wait to find the answers... Smile

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Posted by Firebird on 25-01-2008 at 12:08:

I promise to try post one or two parts before the end of the day

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