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Posted by Firebird on 21-09-2007 at 10:18:

Hidden Feelings

A short fic from the eagles POV

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Posted by clouddancer on 22-09-2007 at 00:24:

I really like this FB. Ken's fire and rage controlled by the weight of command.

I find, in my Universe, when this rage slips out of his control it makes Mark more aggressive and impulsive than Jason. I think we somethimes see that in the Gatch eps.

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 22-09-2007 at 03:50:

Wow... talk about depressing!

I really felt this though... you made it seem like I was having insight into Ken's mind. You've definitely captured his feelings.

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Posted by Ebonyswanne on 22-09-2007 at 09:18:

You know FB you got into his head well, all his pent up emotions...

I loved reading it...

what great insight you have into Ken and how he so much more mature he is for his young years, because of the life he has lead and how much he wants something else out of it.

I liked your visuals, I could imagine him sitting there watching the approaching storm, and seeing his own emotions reflected in it...

I have often thought that if Ken had a choice he would lead a normal life, he would express his emotions more. It was not natural for him to bottle it all up like he does and when he went into battle he took it out there instead...his devotion to getting the job done...

You touched on love and I could see that with Ken...he has as much passion as the Condor but they express it in different ways.

Thanks for sharing the story FB!

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Posted by Firebird on 22-09-2007 at 16:02:

Thank you for the feedback. I tried to show that he was more than the exterior he portrays or at least feels he has to portray because of his responsibilities.

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 22-09-2007 at 16:40:

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Originally posted by Firebird
Thank you for the feedback. I tried to show that he was more than the exterior he portrays or at least feels he has to portray because of his responsibilities.

You definitely succeeded in that!

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Posted by clouddancer on 22-09-2007 at 18:33:

I agree with TJ,

You definiately succeeded in showing Ken's inner emotions/struggle.

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