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Posted by Transmute Jun on 20-05-2007 at 00:19:

A Place on the Team

A behind-the-scenes look at the operation of the G-Force team. How will G-Force defeat their newest enemy?

Excerpt:

Briefly, I wonder why these are called ten second oil breaks. Who made up that name, anyhow? Certainly, not the engineers who designed this device. It takes at least one hundred seconds for the oil to fully circulate through my circuits, and my operating capacity isn't optimal unless I stay in the changing platform significantly longer than that.

I can barely admit it to myself, but sometimes... sometimes I purposely stay here even longer than I need to. So that I have a chance to relax, too. How angry would Chief Anderson be if he knew that I thought of these as ten thousand second oil breaks?

Warning: This fic contains mild language and sexual refernces.

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Posted by Condorfan on 26-05-2007 at 07:18:

Transmute Jun

A Place on the Team was great! I've always felt that Zark would have been the perfect mole for Spectra. He's so annoying that people ignore him. I liked how Jason put the pieces together to find out what was happening--and using 1-Rover-1 to spy on Zark--wonderful! (I like Rover more than Zark). You write so easily about both the Gatchaman and BOTP universes---wish I had that talent. When I first saw BOTP I thought Jason was a Hawk and Keyop a Sparrow! Shows what I know.

Keep up the great work--I'm looking forward to more!

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Posted by Transmute Jun on 05-08-2007 at 02:18:

I only just saw this comment today... i can't think how I missed it!

I'm so glad you liked this! It started out as a way for me to stretch my creative skills by writing from the POV of the character I hated the most... and then I got the wicked idea that Zark was behind Jason's mysterious illness... and it grew from there

I really appreciate that you took the time to make comments. Thank you!

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