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Title: "The Kleenex Story", more formally entitled "Fallen"

Rating: Adults only. There is a crap ton of swearing and depictions of major violence.

Description: Emotional angst and turmoil. Written because Sam asked me to "...write something sappy and no, i don't mind if somebody has to get hurt during it."

I totally took her at her word.

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Lyon, I love the way you write. You describe the scene so clearly I can clearly see everything and feel the angst Joe feels.

I need to see if you have posted my favourite story of yours - Crucible.

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I love the way you read!

i have no idea what I posted either... Crucible is one of my favorites too, for what it's worth.

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No, I don't see Crucible here. I will look forward to you posting it when you get time and if the site will allow.

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/salutes

yes, ma'am. sir.

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I am an Owl, I am meant to salute you my Eagle Friend and salute you I do, and your beautiful writing style. I wish I felt I could write scenes as clearly as you do.

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It's not as hard as it looks. Writing clear scenes that is. Play the movie in your head. Write what you see until you run out of words. Then go back and be *ruthless* at chopping away anything that doesn't match *exactly* what you saw/felt/meant to say.

It makes for short stories which means it's harder for the reader to fall asleep in the middle. Although I'm sure some have tried!

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LOL

I will try to remember that when I try some more writing.

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